Light 'n dark 2

Posted by Helen (Melbourne, Australia) on 31 March 2007 in Landscape & Rural.

There’s a Hole in the Clouds

There’s a hole in the clouds,
The full moon shines through.
The light makes me feel all will be well, soon.

The black clouds sweep by the light is gone.
Covered once again in blackness.

There’s a hole in the clouds,
Light shines through.
Moonlight, clouds, light, dark
All through the night.

I feel life is like that, light, dark.
A person walks in darkness then,
There is a hole in the clouds
And the moonlight shows through.

Tex

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Kheoh Yee Wei from Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia

i think you should level the colors in this image so that the lights would be more visible ;) Anyway,nice capture,Helen =)

31 Mar 2007 6:14am

Bronnie from Christchurch, New Zealand

I love the muted tones and the poem - the only thing I wondered was whether the sea and rocks could be crisper (but then see my image today - the softness there is deliberate!)

31 Mar 2007 7:09am

Shuva from Hyderabad, India

I agree with Kheoh -- you could have played with your photo editor a bit.

31 Mar 2007 9:10am

Craiger from Vacaville, California, United States

Beautiful!

31 Mar 2007 7:45pm

amy from Rocky Mountain House, Canada

The poem fits the image... having said that I agree with Bronnie about the sea being crisper. (mind you, my plumeria shot is too soft I think...???)

1 Apr 2007 1:43am